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Goddess Venus
by Silvina Castellano → (All Poetry by Silvina Castellano)
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Oh! Languid goddess who sees the world

from on high tempestuous Olympus,

so presumptuous of your beauty.

You, who emerged from the bewitched

waters of eternal sea.


Your skin has been threaded with gold

and silver fibres.


Your golden hair was wrought with

innate refinement.


You seduce every man with your

slender silhouette,

but your conscience scrutinizes your

not so beautiful behavior.


 Why,each time your enchantment

increases, does the white

foam from where you once emerged ,

turn to be so dark?


Through negligence, perhaps all

goodness you destroyed.


Your ironic vanity, like a symphonic

agony, rushes at your skin, ruining

its magnificent purity.


In any case, Oh! my Muse, I beg you

to revive your melodious harmony

 for us.

   

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 Reviews of "Goddess Venus"
Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on May 6, 2006
I must applaud, very well done. I love your 'voice' in your writing, very elegant and articulate.

Reviewed by Shreekumar Varma
Reviewed on April 6, 2006
the words flow with your mood, probably beckoning us to mount olympus! keep it going, we're waiting.

Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2006
Dear Silvina;

Thisis excellent. May I recommend to you, my poems "Crystal Dreams" and "The Touch"?

Yours truly,

Doc

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
A beauty. Glad to make your aquaintence, Silvina...

Reviewed on May 11, 2005
I haven't met your work /writings yet! :) Glad I fell upon it today... This is REally GOOD! I love your descriptions- I hope you write more........ Truly,Sheee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
You write very well, Silvina. Thank you for sharing this poetic beauty. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 16, 2003
Hello...This is outstanding work from the magical pen of yours....I am lured and completely mesmerized by the divine beauty of this breathtaking write....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2003
I'm glad I stumbled upon this.
I wish I spoke spanish so I could understand the rest of your work.
-James


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