Next Sunday all will have some to say, with roses, with words, with a little caress.
Wishing not to take your thunder I post it today, a small tribute for little girls and boys that will be carrying other kind of roses...
Little girl
tell me why you are crying
all alone
in the church's crosses garden?
Why the sorrow
that got the tears falling?
and the sobs
from an heart that is aching?
Oh! it is Mother Day
and looking for yours, you are,
in a cold forest made
of stones with engraved names.
Sad little girl...
I can't console you, because,
around here,
I'm only, the Angel of Death.
wow! the last sentence of this poem really sends something sinister.
Reviewed by apple du plessis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
2008, my mother died. she was my aunt actually, but my biological mother didn't care. she called me her own. i miss her terribly.....thank you for this poem. it touched my heart
Apple
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
I was that little girl...only in July 2005. I miss my mama
Wish I had come upon this MOther's Day 2008. But glad anyway I came across it now. Father's day is coming up , so I think I'll visit Dad and Mother's grave too while visiting Tom's too. In fact, it is 96 degrees out, but to Tom's grave I'll go this afternoon. Can't help myself. Sad write but all of us have to go through it. Thanks for the memories too you write about your wife and I enjoy them awfully much.
A touching write indeed! I am among the blessed for I still have my mother with me. I try to enjoy each day that the Lord gives us together. Reminds me too of those whom do not have their mothers here, my grandmother went home to be with the Lord ten years ago this year, I miss her terribly and I know my mom misses her even more. Touching write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Georg,
This poem touched my heart. My Mother has been with Jesus for many years now, but I miss her as if it were yesterday. She was killed by a hit - run driver when she was only 39. She left 8 kids behind, me being the oldest and so much responsibilty. My Mother was my best friend, Georg. Not having her to talk too has left a big void in my heart. Thank you for this outstanding poem.
Well George is been 12 years and I'm not a
Little girl but I still miss my mother
Even do she was not part of my life
As I was growing up,when she was getting older
We finally built a relationship I always love her
So very much Mother's day or any day
I will always miss her
Very sad poem and very realistic realty
For many of us!!
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star
This is so very sad, Georg...children should never have to be without the warm comforts of their mothers. Even as an adult, one of my greatest fears is the day that my mother will leave this earth.
Take care,
Sherry
Now you made me cry Georg...
I miss my mom SO MUCH and I will always be "A Sad Little Girl" no matter how old I get!
I remember the last Mother's day my mom was with us...
...every year was a special celebration for her. We would all meet at a very nice place to eat and share stories with her and bring her gifts, perfectly chosen.
But, the last Mother's day, she was too sick to join us at the restuarant. We all wanted to come to her, but she insisted we still keep the reservation. We were all there but mom wasn't. I couldn't wait to leave...
I didn't want to face another Mother's day like that EVER, without her at the table, but I had to! Mom died two days later...
Mom knew...and I guess she wanted us to realize what we didn't want to...
Some days are easier than others...huh?
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
This is a sad reminder to us of the heartache so many will be experiencing. I liked your imagery of "a cold forest made of stones with engraved names".
Youch! A SAD reality!
I like how this was written Georg!
A child weeps...
My prayers are with them SOMEWHERE/EVERYWHERE!
as there MOm is in Peace and in spirit with them!
YOur heart is BIG, to have empathy "ahead" for a child filled with
much loneliness...
YOu inspired me!
BE SAFE!
STay INspired and Full of Wisdom!
WArmly, WArrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
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Chrissy
Another touching write you've penned: I lost my mother 17 years ago. How I miss her, still...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
A truly heartfelt tribute, Georg.
This poem touched my heart. My Mother has been with Jesus for many years now, but I miss her as if it were yesterday. She was killed by a hit - run driver when she was only 39. She left 8 kids behind, me being the oldest and so much responsibilty. My Mother was my best friend, Georg. Not having her to talk too has left a big void in my heart. Thank you for this outstanding poem.
Many blessings,
~Linda
chilled to the bone at such sadness.
in a cold forest made
of stones with engraved names.
wonderful lines.
Kathy
For this outstanding piece
This is a keeper
Peace be with you
William
Thanks for the good write.
Dan
to many who no longer have one! Kudo's!
Love,
Eileen
Love Tinka
Little girl but I still miss my mother
Even do she was not part of my life
As I was growing up,when she was getting older
We finally built a relationship I always love her
So very much Mother's day or any day
I will always miss her
Very sad poem and very realistic realty
For many of us!!
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star
Carmen
Take care,
Sherry
I miss my mom SO MUCH and I will always be "A Sad Little Girl" no matter how old I get!
I remember the last Mother's day my mom was with us...
...every year was a special celebration for her. We would all meet at a very nice place to eat and share stories with her and bring her gifts, perfectly chosen.
But, the last Mother's day, she was too sick to join us at the restuarant. We all wanted to come to her, but she insisted we still keep the reservation. We were all there but mom wasn't. I couldn't wait to leave...
I didn't want to face another Mother's day like that EVER, without her at the table, but I had to! Mom died two days later...
Mom knew...and I guess she wanted us to realize what we didn't want to...
Some days are easier than others...huh?
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I like how this was written Georg!
A child weeps...
My prayers are with them SOMEWHERE/EVERYWHERE!
as there MOm is in Peace and in spirit with them!
YOur heart is BIG, to have empathy "ahead" for a child filled with
much loneliness...
YOu inspired me!
BE SAFE!
STay INspired and Full of Wisdom!
WArmly, WArrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox