A universal idea in this poem that is well handled. Yes, some of our dreams are indeed "drenched in fear" while others' lead us to have "reasons to be proud". You don't waste words in this one, everything subtle, understated, to the point. Well done. PS: I would take the "s" off repairs in the second line: you don't need it and it spoils the otherwise tight rhyme-scheme.
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Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
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powerful sentiment
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