Poet's flame some dying ember
About to be squelched,
But for some bright glimpse
Of another glorious world.
The spark to the Eye,
Send kindling aflame;
Couching the next phrase.
The Stars alter course,
New words, one after one;
Build the confrageration,
The Whole grasping at life.
Pen's touch and redress,
Finally brings birth,
A new fragile Child revealed.
Copyright.2002.Lawrance George Lux
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Reviewed on December 26, 2002
May you enjoy a creative and fulfilling New Year, lawrence
best regards,
Minerva Bloom~
Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
I loved this poem! These words speak so much!
Finally brings birth,
A new fragile Child revealed
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best regards,
Minerva Bloom~
Finally brings birth,
A new fragile Child revealed
Poet's flame some dying ember
some bright glimpse
Of another glorious
This part threw me off with images of couches and eyes catching fire:
Send kindling aflame;
Couching the next phrase.
I found this somewhat uplifting and resonant:
The Stars alter course,
New words, one after one
Liked the overall feel of this poem. Dense, rich, a little frightening, perhaps like new or flickering life