will the sea remember me?
does the sea remember the others who have walked along this beach?
does it remember the castles that children built with sand?
will it remember my thoughts as I glanced at its pale green waves,
pressing the memories close to the album in my mind,
like the castles the children built fated to fade with the tide?
is there a recorded history that shifts us from our form
as our footprints destined to go
back to sand again in time?
and will I, like those others who walked here, remain in another form
as part of the sea and its waves, the sand and pebbles and sky
and the sounds of the sea in my mind?
will the sea remember me?
(c) Copyright 2007
Photograph by Gloria Gay, Copyright2008
thought provoking read
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in our lifetime, those that are curious.
Very well written.
Deborah
You have managed to capture in words the thoughts of one who thinks deeply about life and to challenge us all to share our inner musings. I love your poetry. -Zach :) Write on!!
Some evocative imagery here.
Lovely alliteration; "fated to fade".
Axilea
Be safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Regis
Fee