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Was It You?
by david stansfield → (All Poetry by david stansfield)
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Was it you that I saw

Stepping out on the floor

Was it you dancing close to him

Were you angry or lonely

Or restless or bored

Did you hang on

To his every word

Or was it waves crashing and no more

Was it you that once said

I was easily led

Or was it you who led me astray

Were you hung up or strung out

Was love wearing thin

Did you lose hope before we could begin

Was it you that I saw with him

Were you once my guiding light

Or did you betray with a kiss

Did you savour that sweet taste of sin

Was it you

Was it you

That I saw with him

(c) David Stansfield 2008


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 Reviews of "Was It You?"
Reviewed by Quanda Graves
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
OOOhhhh!!! Wow!!! This poem was very visual and I love how you bring it in at the end and made everyone feel the pain. Poetic justice.

Until...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
How crushingly heartbreaking yet so delicately penned...

Be always safe,
Karen


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