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Mist
by K. Mulroney → (All Poetry by K. Mulroney)
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This was actually what I wrote after I got laid off twice in three years.


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 Ah yes,

The battle to stand facing skies of misty downfall.

I have drowned in this naked hovel, my future, once before.

An elegant sparkled palace, not.

Though not a rotted shell on last legs dwell.

Is it the inevitable that I feared or the aftermath of the reality?

A question for me to fondle to be sure.

React in haste of battle?

Or

Acceptance of fate.

What lunacy we pull upon our fleshy shoulders.

Clash for what was not ours to keep or thus label it a sham to save ones blasted ego.

Tis my hang about - fate is a mere sketch of avoidance.

An excuse for denial of fault that only a human weakness - could invent.

If not truth, would the wounded bird by arrowed point, be fate on his part?

Born to die by crafted tool?

 I trouble with such belief.

Acceptance was never meant to be surrender.

What then my answer be?

That change, no matter the garment it hides beneath, is evolution?

I cannot say.

But I will move beneath this, God’s tree, where faith resides.

And as the skies misty downfall feeds the foliage huge,

the answer I seek will arrive when moon and sun have past and come again.

In good time, it will be.

 

 

 

By: K. Mulroney

                                                             (V)

 

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 Reviews of "Mist"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
"...born to die by crafted tool?..." is the fate of every poet worth its salt!
Some write about love others love to write, some let others to love them and there are people around that just love.
Life can be a peaceful mist or an storming event, we are bound to wear our galoshes...just in case.

Georg


Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
AH...IN THE END, ATER DEALING WITH ALL THE MULTITUDE OF TANGLED THOUGHTS AND EMOTIONS WE GO TO HIM WHO IS ABLE TO 'TAKE US THROUGH'...FOR THERE IS A TOMORROW. WRITTEN WELL AND SO ENJOYED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS AWESOME WORK. BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
A positive emotional masterpiece. Patrick

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Large round of appreciative applause for this emotional and dramatic inspirational. I have never read such a strong voice in the face of adversity and it gives me hope as well...

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
A very moving poem that makes the spirit soar in the end!
Splendid poem,Great pic!...ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Ah, now the feeling well, but through faith all things are possible...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Kim,
From these ashes rise strength and never say die, I like your attitude and fighting spirit - "Acceptance was never meant to be surrender."
John

Reviewed by john faulkner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Outstanding work. I had to read it twice to savor your wording context and take in your metaphore usage. I needed to pick your brain a bit to comprehend what message you were puting forth. You made me think, and that is good for any writer, so important. Great job with this. It brings back memories, and good ones too. Nice hearing from you again. I am always around,

See ya,

John

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Thus, the poets reigns again and pours forth in true form the battle that exists over a lost job. Well done!

George

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
K. I fid this a deeply profound write. My favorite lines and what I think are the crux of the matter. It is absolutely amazing how a little thing like 'ego' can play such a huge role in all our lives.
"Acceptance of fate.
What lunacy we pull upon our fleshy shoulders.
Clash for what was not ours to keep or thus label it a sham to save ones blasted ego."

Well done!
Cheers,
Dan



Reviewed on June 19, 2009
They say there is a silver lining in all life's problems
Although I haven't found it yet, in some of mine :)
Wonderful piece of poetry, I enjoyed
Have a great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Such hope in lines penned in despair - thank you, K. Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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