Bite the bight and be the bee to birth your berth, worthy of, bard...
Not to shoot the chute, but
They've barred the bard!
All eyes counted the ayes and its official!
Arms raised, were razed. . . his rood, too rude. . .
What pours from his pores poules in his pools. . .
E'er to lay in the lye to lie. . .
No intension's; no intentions
Thus, when inveighed, we must invade!
Indicting those inditing. . .
To know, “No, the hoe is not to hoa!
Only a loan to the lone. . . a hymn to him!"
“Oh sear, O' seer!
Like the sea, here . . . See hear!
The cession in your session to pen, will last only as long as
it takes you to pried you of your pride,
and, take a good peek at your peaks. . .
Reek what wreaks!
Right your writes!"
But until that day arrives, the vise to vice will white this wight,
or sight, to ne'er cite again!
I love the way that you weave words, Kimmy; so clever. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
Very well done indeed sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugssss
Reviewed by Fallen Sword (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
As always, up to your fascinating word-tricks! Conga Kimmy strikes again! I love it :)
When you get a moment, drop over to the Message Forum on TWF, where this poem has received some cool comments. I especially like the one by Lauretta Scalzo [sp?] who has even read Chaucer. She is a new TWF member, too.
This took a lot of thought to put down. It is a clever play on words, and it made me smile. Something I haven't done in a while. Thank you sharing these baring lines.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie
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When you get a moment, drop over to the Message Forum on TWF, where this poem has received some cool comments. I especially like the one by Lauretta Scalzo [sp?] who has even read Chaucer. She is a new TWF member, too.
Ted
Amusing wordplay.
Ron
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie
Cheers,
Dan
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John
Love & Luv,
Sage