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To a Girl with Green Eyes
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Watchful beacons fierce and free
The kind so green as verdant sea
Of mint and clover sentiently…
Wrapped around your pupil be
 
Etchings on a radial gem
Echo to my deepest whim
Crystal carvings never dim
Further from thy pupil stem
 
Glistening gaze of dampened jewel
Strings along the avid fool
Not so kind, but not so cruel
Instead a different kind of school
 
Luscious is the teary glaze
That gifts me just beyond the maze
To gently whisper sensual praise
And rival my most treasured days
 
Subtle flits of dashing green
Shifty, charismatic sheen
Piercing through prosaic scene
Coaxing me to intervene
 
Sights aligned with passion’s will
Sting me with thy lover’s quill
A woman, lest my heart be still
As she moves in for the kill
 
Iris twin; an emerald pair
Tell of field and forest fair
Gradient of goddess stare
I wonder what thoughts may be there
 
 
 
 
 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "To a Girl with Green Eyes"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 9, 2009
Love the rhythm here. A real classic feel. The first verse is my favorite. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Beautiful poem.excellent work.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
A fine ode, Brandon. I also appreciate your unique style. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
Your writing style is classic. To read your work aloud is to bring it to life. Your scheme's rhythm, flow is natural and unrepressed. I especially like:
"Iris twin; an emerald pair
Tell of field and forest fair..."


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