Old woman sitting there in her chair
Feeding the birds and enjoying fresh air
Goals, aspirations, and dreams all behind
The future a scary place in her mind
Hair of silver, coat of blue
A cane to walk with across grass-filled dew
Gentle hands busy feeding little birds
Work-worn fingers like the mind of a thousand words.
Old woman, born into a world of family and kin
Mother and father, brothers and sisters then,
And later a husband and children of her own
A storybook romance, a fulfilled life, her home.
Memories now, all sliding into the past
But oh how wonderful that the memories still last
When all else slides away into ashes and dust
When the dark shades of life carry us where it must.
Old woman still making the most of her aging days;
Lovely weather, nature’s sweet charm, warm sunshine rays.
Such gentle things now claim her thoughts
But after all, it is the fulfillment of all she has sought.
With gracious beauty still in her sweet old soul
With deep love still in her warm old heart,
With simple sacred joy of vast wonder and fate
She continues the breath of life as if it’s never too late.
From the perspective of an old man mere weeks away from my 78th birthday, Jeanette, I read every word with soulful identification.
All my friends and coworkers of yesterday are gone except the most sacred of all: My wife and companion of 64 years. And I am so blessed to enjoy the love and frequent visitations of family. Truly, the "breath of life" is never too late. I cherish every day.
And "Painting by J. Cooper"? Lovely. You've been holding out on me, my dear friend. I love to write and have my writing read. But I'd be mortified if anyone so much as caught a glimpse of anything I've tried to draw or paint. Even my "painting by numbers" attempts are embarrassing!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us all.
JEANETTE...I MUST KNOW. DID YOU ACTUALLY COME ACROSS A SCENE LIKE THIS? OR WERE YOU INSPIRED TO PAINT THIS SCENE AND THEN THE WORDS CAME? THE PAINTING AND THE POEM GO TOGETHER SO WELL...YOU'VE DONE A WONDERFUL TWO-FOLD JOB HERE THAT I REALLY ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
This is a wondrous piece indeed..
I'm saving it..something to ponder on..yup I'm gettin' old..loL
A wonderful insight that looks beyond the stumbling step and the white hair and wrinkles. Lovely to read, especially
"with deep love still in her warm old heart"
It makes me want to grow old like the woman of your poem.
Jeanette: I found this piece early this morning and just fell in love with it. The images are magnificent & the flow in each line...is like a flowing stream. A great job!
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All my friends and coworkers of yesterday are gone except the most sacred of all: My wife and companion of 64 years. And I am so blessed to enjoy the love and frequent visitations of family. Truly, the "breath of life" is never too late. I cherish every day.
And "Painting by J. Cooper"? Lovely. You've been holding out on me, my dear friend. I love to write and have my writing read. But I'd be mortified if anyone so much as caught a glimpse of anything I've tried to draw or paint. Even my "painting by numbers" attempts are embarrassing!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us all.
Richard
I'm saving it..something to ponder on..yup I'm gettin' old..loL
Vesna
"with deep love still in her warm old heart"
It makes me want to grow old like the woman of your poem.
nice.....Art Sun...
An outstanding presentation of bountiful artistic bouquet of flowers of life scented with the aroma of wisdom.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Old Woman".
In gratitude and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU