My grandparents and my dad lived back in a time when even a radio was a luxury. They were the greatest storytellers I've known, and perhaps it's from them that I get my love of telling stories through writing.
My Old Pop
In that little shack you see Out there in the bay Me and my old Pop came there Nearly every weekend we’d stay.
We’d fish out of the windows, We’d fish out of the doors, We’d fish off the rough-hewn dock We’d fish along the shore.
If lucky, we’d catch enough fish to fry At the end of a long hot day, Then we’d lean back in our lawn chairs And look out across the bay.
We’d watch the seabirds swooping low Diving for fish as quick as a sigh, Calling out their strange bird calls White wings floating against a lovely blue sky.
My old pop had a memory like a recorder, And loved to tell stories about his life He told me a story grandpa told to him Of how grandpa chose grandma for his wife. (He bid for her basket at a picnic.)
Pop talked about his life as a boy When the entire family worked the farm Hard work and few returns, he said, Cold winters when the old fireplace kept us warm.
We had wonderful vegetable gardens, he added And lots of fine nourishing food to eat, But cattle were very important for their milk So poultry and pork were served for our meat.
Twilight slowly slides to dusk Darkness with a million stars create a glorious sight Mosquitoes begin feeding on our arms and face, Making it time to say goodnight.
Let me tell you another story, Pop mutters from his bed, From my cot I listen to his voice so deep, My mind forming pictures and images from his words Until I fall fast asleep.
Let me tell you another story…
Goodnight, Pop,
I hope you’re still telling your stories--
to the angels! I love you…
A FANTASTIC WORK...A WONDERFUL, WELL DONE TRIBUTE TO YOUR FATHER, WHICH MAKES ME THINK OF MINE. HE WAS A FINE SOUTHERN GENTLEMEN...MY OLD POP, WAS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Jeanette,
The ending on this made tears well! What I like about this most is how it shows another side of you. You look so elegant in your picture. It's hard to imagine you fishing...lol! I love fishing, too, and I think wonderful memories are created in that waiting time. You prove that true with this piece. Live well:)
Sheila
Such a beautiful write my dear friend...thoughts of those awaiting us on the other side keeps us pressing on...and our memories that cannot be taken away are the best treasures one can have! Loved this, my family was raised just as yours was, hard but with much love and radio a pleasure and the best entertainment around! My mamaw was the storyteller...loved this walk down memory lane!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
Lots of good memories here Jeanette, they will be forever memorialized in your beautiful poem.
Hugs, Laura
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JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The ending on this made tears well! What I like about this most is how it shows another side of you. You look so elegant in your picture. It's hard to imagine you fishing...lol! I love fishing, too, and I think wonderful memories are created in that waiting time. You prove that true with this piece. Live well:)
Sheila
Really enjoyed reading it!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Hugs, Laura
A poetic feast serving ambrosias to please Erato and Minerva, and all the guests readers of "My Old Pop".
I salute You Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Great ones for sure..
Thanks for stopping my way..
Enjoyed immensely...
thank you,
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Enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~