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Night Animal
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
Sunday, September 2, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Stop!

Sighing is a time

That begins when the flexible

Soil opens and lets your weight disappear

Into some elastic womb of sheltering lullaby thoughts

And, like a bedtime story,

Your life between brackets is a mellifluous garden

You don’t want to leave.

Sensitive to the thousand sounds and inner sights

Of contemplation and comfort

That compensate for the loss of beautiful landscapes;

Protective and stretching to reach the blue,

Umbrella pines and soft winds, embracing bays and rhyming isles

Are gone, forever, but found in silent nights.

Hours are liquid and there is some hope

That at some point the relentless flow

Will stop to form a lake, a cradle of warmth

Against the non-space of an insipid mock-city…

Yes, it is a “dangerous” hope, taken as a medicine

While willingly ignoring its side effects

Of feeding the imaginary beauty

To push and push away the toxic stench

Of ever triumphant reality: the disease.

At night there is a movement in the air,

A life stronger than life, yet cowardly beaten,

The free dance of the soulful animal,

A gambol before the cruelest dawn.

 


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 Reviews of "Night Animal"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on September 17, 2018
I am in love with the first five lines of this poem. I can ab.soul.utely feel that yawning elastic underneath a delicious dream. Of course, not all dreams are delicious, but a gratifying sigh is. And the word "gambol" is delicious too. I mean, who uses it anymore? It's descriptive. It's full of soul. I'll take a gambol with the night animals over a "mock city" atrocity any day! --Charlie

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
Inspired wordsmithing that finds the heart of the subject and asks all who read it to consider their own "free dance of the soulful animal..."

"mellifluous garden" indeed. Only the unconscious would attempt to leave. Beautiful expressions. Thank you for posting.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
Very Nice!!!! Glad to see YOU, Axilea!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
Most certainly a wide open dreamscape where anything is possible under the guise of night. The images your words evoked make this a priceless piece of poetry.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
Nature, raw and explained with a poetical bent toward the absurd, which nature itself absorbs. Good writing.

Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
"At night there is a movement in the air,

A life stronger than life, yet cowardly beaten,

The free dance of the soulful animal,

A gambol before the cruelest dawn."

Very evocative and also beautifully pleasing, Axilea. Panther, panther, absence of light, velvet movements in the night...

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 2, 2018
a contemplative poem, full of mystery and insight. Well done.


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