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Thread Count (Poem, excerpt from the book, Thread Count)
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Thread Count
by Terri Kirby Erickson

My mother hung wet sheets to dry from a rope
that stretched between two poles in our back yard, her motions
smooth and rhythmic as a synchronized swimmer. She
stooped and straightened again and again, her hands
moving across the line faster than
squirrels on telephone wire.

From my perch on the swing, I watched her work,
pumping my legs until I touched puffy
white clouds with the toes of my shoes, the squeak

of the metal chain steady as a metronome.
My body felt light as dandelion seeds, floating.
Higher and higher I swung, until it seemed
I was a kite soaring on the end of a

string. I slung my head back and let
my hair trail in the dirt, closing my eyes so the
sensation in my belly was like the swift

descent of an elevator in a tall building. The sun
felt like warm maple syrup dripping on my
face, and the air smelled of honeysuckle and bacon
grease in glass jars sitting on the window

sill. I opened my eyes as my mother lifted
the last sheet from the pile, with light illuminating the
threads like the hours in a child’s summer day,
too many to count.

     

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 Reviews of "Thread Count (Poem, excerpt from the book, Thread Count)"
Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
You and I share an experience e from two different views. Yours is a wonderful poetic recall, which I enjoyed the reading and meaning of every word. Mine is that I wasn't in a swing, but helping my Momma gather fire wood to make the water in the black pot boil, helping her keep the clothes stirred, wringing the heavies out, and carrying them to the clothesline (not a rope, but a wire) How well you bring such loving memories back to an older and appreciative man. I like the sincerity in your work. - Bill


Reviewed on February 9, 2007

Outstanding imagery, a touch of art and beauty abound in this composition. "Thread Count (Poem, excerpt from the book, Thread Count)" Has impressed me.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 8, 2007
This is nice, a view into the memories of the past, I can also remember this picture of clothes being hung along ropes outside with the wind to dry...a nice poem that brings back memories...


nice.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
I can recall feeling like this as my mother hung sheets when I was a child...it was a trip back in time. Thank you Terri. Beautiful piece. Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed on December 29, 2006
My favorite part is this beautiful waterfall sequence of images evoking innocence, love of family, and a deep connection to one's personal history...

"I slung my head back and let
my hair trail in the dirt, closing my eyes so the
sensation in my belly was like the swift

descent of an elevator in a tall building. The sun
felt like warm maple syrup dripping on my
face, and the air smelled of honeysuckle and bacon
grease in glass jars sitting on the window

sill."

What a gorgeous memory/story. Thanks for sharing.

S. Donovan Mullaney (fellow poet)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
A most engaging poem, Terri. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Appealing prose, tactile imagery, and strong non-stop simile.

THREAD COUNT represents "below the surface" artistic insight, and also the ability to convey what is being viewed in a unique and satisfying manner.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg


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