My mother hung wet sheets to dry from a rope
that stretched between two poles in our back yard, her motions
smooth and rhythmic as a synchronized swimmer. She
stooped and straightened again and again, her hands
moving across the line faster than
squirrels on telephone wire.
From my perch on the swing, I watched her work,
pumping my legs until I touched puffy
white clouds with the toes of my shoes, the squeak
of the metal chain steady as a metronome.
My body felt light as dandelion seeds, floating.
Higher and higher I swung, until it seemed
I was a kite soaring on the end of a
string. I slung my head back and let
my hair trail in the dirt, closing my eyes so the
sensation in my belly was like the swift
descent of an elevator in a tall building. The sun
felt like warm maple syrup dripping on my
face, and the air smelled of honeysuckle and bacon
grease in glass jars sitting on the window
sill. I opened my eyes as my mother lifted
the last sheet from the pile, with light illuminating the
threads like the hours in a child’s summer day,
too many to count.
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You and I share an experience e from two different views. Yours is a wonderful poetic recall, which I enjoyed the reading and meaning of every word. Mine is that I wasn't in a swing, but helping my Momma gather fire wood to make the water in the black pot boil, helping her keep the clothes stirred, wringing the heavies out, and carrying them to the clothesline (not a rope, but a wire) How well you bring such loving memories back to an older and appreciative man. I like the sincerity in your work. - Bill
Outstanding imagery, a touch of art and beauty abound in this composition. "Thread Count (Poem, excerpt from the book, Thread Count)" Has impressed me.
This is nice, a view into the memories of the past, I can also remember this picture of clothes being hung along ropes outside with the wind to dry...a nice poem that brings back memories...
I can recall feeling like this as my mother hung sheets when I was a child...it was a trip back in time. Thank you Terri. Beautiful piece. Blessings, Michelle
My favorite part is this beautiful waterfall sequence of images evoking innocence, love of family, and a deep connection to one's personal history...
"I slung my head back and let
my hair trail in the dirt, closing my eyes so the
sensation in my belly was like the swift
descent of an elevator in a tall building. The sun
felt like warm maple syrup dripping on my
face, and the air smelled of honeysuckle and bacon
grease in glass jars sitting on the window
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Outstanding imagery, a touch of art and beauty abound in this composition. "Thread Count (Poem, excerpt from the book, Thread Count)" Has impressed me.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
nice.....Art Sun...
"I slung my head back and let
my hair trail in the dirt, closing my eyes so the
sensation in my belly was like the swift
descent of an elevator in a tall building. The sun
felt like warm maple syrup dripping on my
face, and the air smelled of honeysuckle and bacon
grease in glass jars sitting on the window
sill."
What a gorgeous memory/story. Thanks for sharing.
S. Donovan Mullaney (fellow poet)
Regis
THREAD COUNT represents "below the surface" artistic insight, and also the ability to convey what is being viewed in a unique and satisfying manner.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg