THE STORM (poem) by Kristian L Mahrling-Harding on AuthorsDen

THE STORM
by Kristian L Mahrling-Harding → (All Poetry by Kristian L Mahrling-Harding)
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Admonition of TRUTH: "Think what you will! It is easier than prying your foot from your mouth or your head from your posterior. Once it leaves the tongue, it is like the internet...you can not delete it!"

Distant grumblings pierce the silence within Dark clouds of emotions gather The Winds of Change, blow Roiling the air of discontent Closer...Closer, comes the storm Bolts of Anger, Frustration, Pain, cut through space Electrifying...Lighting the panorama of fear The darkness grows, invading like a cancer Agony- screams out Shaking the foundationof SOUL Tornadic grief whilrs from those betrayers Who cast stones at the delicate windows of trust Broken, shattered, cutting a swath of internal destruction Thunderous cries quake and shutter in deciples of dispair Listen...listen...The Storm RAGES! Through the surge of impotent Power A ray of sunshine on the lips of love Breaks through the maelstrom Eyes of understanding, compassion, see Through The Storm...warm in their light The calm returns Tears rain down in steady release Protectively held in the richness Safe in the embrace of a Promise Of a New Day!

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory

Reviewed on November 21, 2013

Hi Krissy,

You are looking good, despite life�s many storms.

Mor.

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on November 17, 2013

Awesome writing, thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on November 13, 2013

extremely well written
budd

Reviewed by Tao Chi

Reviewed on November 10, 2013

Love this. No matter what pain, grievous state we find ourselves in. Either due to the actions of another, there is always the promise of tomorrow. A new day. A new beginning to leave the past behind. Beautifully sculpted.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on November 9, 2013

This is superb work, Kristian I sense betrayal from ones who can no longer be trusted The last two stanzas really stand out for me "safe in the embrace of a Promise" beautiful work
Amor

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

At first I thought I was reading from Revelations. And then I see that common sense and sanity arrived at the end. Nicely written.

Ron