The Path to Progress (poem) by Debra Faulconer Baker on AuthorsDen

The Path to Progress
by Debra Faulconer Baker → (All Poetry by Debra Faulconer Baker)
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Walk lightly into the oval office...With dignity...Suppress war...Return troops from the desert sands...Where terrorism has planted too many seeds...
*Today* A majority of the nation Identify you as a Dasher Walk lightly into the oval office With dignity Give the people back integrity Suppress war Return troops from the desert sands Where terrorism has planted too many seeds Speak boldly unto the nations A wish of peace amongst all countries in this world Tear down the walls of fear Acknowledge a power That lie waiting if triggered Give the Elderly who have sacrificed their lives Back a ray of hope Commit unto the people a resolution of insurance Where they not fear debt Destroying what is left of their savings in illness Revoke interest rates which climb the ladder Taking away the little monies Left in the poor mans pockets For though they not are rich They deserve the same rights as do the richer A home for their families These people ask not for a free path They are the blue collars of this nation Strugglers in pride Bury their tears giving them a paradox Bring forth a design to the people where Interest gas and food prices will fall reasonably For The People have chosen you a guiding light Escape their mind’s prejudices of color or creed For finally freedom rings In the path to progress We are one nation under God Indivisible Waiting in hope Copyright 2008

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

Yes, I agree. I wrote a similar poem - same ideas -
just different words.

MERRY CHRISTMAS my friend in Christ!
I just want to take this time to say
"Thank you Jesus for freedom to write!"
Debra, you are a brave lady and I respect
your courage in overcoming cancer.
God Bless you,
John Michael Domino

Reviewed by Leann Marshall

Reviewed on August 27, 2008

Debra,
I think this poem should be read at the Inauguration. A lot of passion and truth lies in these words. I also think it should be sent to your Congressman to be read at the next session.
Leann

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

I remember my grandmother complaining about the price of gas back in the 80's & then the 90's....goodness & the price of milk!!...people can hardly afford to get to work, but can't afford not to go, but then payday goes mostly to the pumps...nothing ever needs to be wasted especially hate....hate is very wasteful & non-productive
Thank You For Your Views & Thought Provoking Piece
Much Love & Peace To You Always Debra
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 26, 2008

This rings of truth, wisdom and common sense. Perhaps one day this world of ours will see the light and learn to live in peace and share....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

"The Path to Progress" sings humanity and patriotism.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Deb I think you captured the voice of a nation making a reasonable request. Not just your nation but other nations that are also feeling too long punished or made to pay for far too much. Well done, this should be sent to the candidates all.
hugs
Fee