Absent Lover is connected to Constant Hope and a gentle reminder that Memorial Day is in memory of ALL who have served and given their very best. dlj
Absent Lover
Dan Johnson
27 May, 2013
The young woman who was filled with constant hope arrived at PDX just before 10:30am in spite of missing three stops along the way.
Message sent via device:
Arriving PDX 11am PST on Delta flight 123 from Atlanta.
Next message:
Circling PDX, estimated arrival, 11:15am.
Absent lover wheeled to waiting area where she sees her lover of constant hope weeping with tears of joy…mutual smiles explode like colliding stars. Our absent lover is now missing her left leg, no thanks to attack in Afghanistan. The young lover assumes control of the wheelchair and takes her absent lover home where the woman of constant hope and her lover abandon all electronic devices.
Sometimes a device
Is nothing more than a dream
Filled with constant hope
Beautiful and sad at the same time along
with truth not only Afghanistan but every
war our young men and women have suffered...
Wonderful picture depicting this...
This poetry is anything but limbless...a heartfelt communication of real time of so many war stories in today's world...regardless of race, religion, or sexual orientation. Nice tribute, Dan...
Sage
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2013
This carries a great deal of power to me, Dan. Quiet, noisy power. Part of that charge was the clause: "...abandon all electronic devices." For some reason the extent of that image is huge. It goes beyond turning off a phone. It creates a marvelous 'stop.' Lovely piece of writing. ~~ Diana (djl)
Beautifully done, my friend. I understand where your heart is, but a memorial is for the departed. Memorial Day is to honor the one who gave their life. Please don't misunderstand me, I think the ones left at home are part of it all, as are the ones who were maimed like the "Absent Lover," and they can be in the hearts of us, but this day is specifically for the ones who gave their lives for their country.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
thanks for sharing
peace be with you
William
Regis
or those departed that God wanted back in
his Kingdom...Saluting the Brave with Pride!
Thank You, Dan!
Lady Vivian
Ron
with truth not only Afghanistan but every
war our young men and women have suffered...
Wonderful picture depicting this...
Love and Light
Lily
Anna
budd
GOD BLESS ALL OUR MILITARY !
Sage
cheers and hugs
SPP