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Come, Now, Make Love to Me- Revised
by D L Johnson → (All Poetry by D L Johnson)
Tuesday, August 21, 2018    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Another old one revised


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Come, now, make love to me.
 
© 2008 & 2018
Dan Johnson
Back-story:

I was returning to Portland, Oregon on Amtrak, while sitting in the lounge car when a young man asked if he could share the space.  Never being one to turn down a chance to converse with someone besides myself, I welcomed his arrival.

After we introduced ourselves, he said, “I’m going to Seattle, how about you?”  I told Anon, that was his name, that I was going to Portland, then on to the Oregon Coast, where I lived.

The train had stopped in Havre, Montana, heading west then south where we could see the eastern edge of the foothills of Glacier National Park and Anon said, ”Look at those beautiful mountains, they sit there like a lover seducing you to come make love to them.”

We continued talking and drinking beer, but my mind kept going back to his statement and the plea from that beautiful woman.

 
Come, now, make love to me.
Here I wait, waiting only for you,
Through spring floods,
Summers heat,
Autumn means out with the old, and Winter has its own mood.
 

I wait patiently for you to embrace my being, I have been here ten thousand years and ten thousand more, however, my yearning is now, only for you to Come, now, make love to me

 
My fields are fertile for the taking, My streams run through the veins of my soul, My supple grassy meadow keeps calling for you to slip into forever dreams while I keep calling, waiting, crying, and hoping that one day you will come, now, and make love to me.
 

At about 10pm, the train stopped at Whitefish, Montana and the air cold and crisp, snow covered the ground, and the train moved slowly west of Glacier and could be heard through its lonesome whistle, “I’ll be back” and a breeze meandered through the trees whispering from a distant place; come, now, make love to me. 


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 Reviews of "Come, Now, Make Love to Me- Revised"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 27, 2021
Interesting encounter... ...and what may come beyond.

Love and peace,

Regis. 🍁

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 25, 2018
My wife and I adore the Oregon coast. Especially from Coos Bay down. We've vacationed there numerous times. I lived in Seattle for nine months when I was on the road with music. Traveled through Montana as well. The imagery in this was effective in serving to bring to mind. Most places you mentioned I've been to. Enjoyed this. Peace... r

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on August 22, 2018
Never been there, but your descriptive wording sure made it sound good. Well Done.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 22, 2018
I don't know about the original, but your revision got to me and brought a tear to my eye. A beautiful personification of a beautiful place. A place that seduces like a young love. I was also taken by your conversation with Anon (short for anonymous?). You reminded me of when my partner first saw and fell in love with the Grand Tetons. She certainly was seduced by them but didn't know the myth. That early pioneers saw those mountains and gave them that name from their appearance… the Big Tits. It sure got lonely for those early trappers and fur traders. Why many of them married Indian women.

Thoroughly enjoyed…

Ron


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