There are five silent chairs in this room that are dusty and empty and lonesome for people. What the first one needs is loving attention - someone with strong hands to push her rungs into place. If she were mine, I would tighten her with some glue and rock with her as only lovers can do. If I had the time, I would sit on the lap of the second one and sigh myself to sleep. She looks so sensual with that hem of sunlight stiched across the soft breast of her pillow. The third one is a small fellow with a stiff back. The plump bottom of a maiden would make him seem less formal. He is the only male, and his loneliness is complete. I'm tempted to throw my jacket over his knobby shoulders. The fourth one is more worn and experienced than the first three. If I had this one, I would tell her that she is still beautiful in her gown of pink burlap with smudges of grease and how sweetly she still sings when she creaks. Last, but more imposing than the other four is the bosomy old sofa. She stretches out in all her upholstered splendor. A fat period piece of a wild era. If I didn't have to leave, I would scrape loose her cat hairs and telltale stains and let her gossipy old springs fill this room with chatter.
I see you are up to your old tricks, C.J. And thanks for doing so. You bring animation to the inanimate, soul to the soulless, spirit to the dispirited. All the best,
Leland
This is a piece written by an 'old soul' as my grandmother was fond of calling me. Someone who can see past the obvious, and into the heart of everything they see. I can't remember reading anything recently that I've enjoyed more. Michelle
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
This one is so sentimental and how I feel when people have moved on and into the nursing home.
this is such a feel good piece
everything have a story...you did well conveying it!!!
Leland