Even for an incomplete vrsion this poems really stands out and say mountains in just what is here. I learned something from this today, and thank you for waking me up, I needed this reminder, so that I know what I am doing and what steps I need to take to get there. Thank you for sharing these words of wisdom.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

I read two poems so far and I like them. Your words pierce through lies so truth can manifest.

I read your poems. I really like them. I never thought about people taking something that God gave me to share.... I guess copy rights don't matter to some people? I will buy the book to check out your work! Many blessings on your journey!

It was going so well.... Very provocative last lines. -Sheila

I was enjoying your poem,but I wish it had an ending. This was so wonderful, just this little bit of work. I do not blame you for not putting it all on the internet.

Very nice

Wonderful truths and questions. Thank you for sharing!

((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

I just knew that you were worth coming back to.

Robert

this is a very good piece of writing, one that should evoke thought and result in some interesting comments.
I like the layered meaning of this and especially that last couplet...whether it is looked at metaphorically or realistically, it is a powerful statement and question.

Peace is a state of mind, a passion of the soul......

Be safe,
Karen

O, yes, Kim, you're going to stir us up here at AuthorsDen. Your words are provocative and a catalyst for change. And your insight is sharp and focused:

"How can you ask for peace globally?
When you don't even speak to your sister..."

Yes, I would read more from Kim Miller.

Richard