such a silly girl (poem) by William P Haynes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 5, 2008

Beautiful image of a struggle to hold onto memories of someone loved. I like the idea of using music to hold onto that image. I sense loss here and hope that it is because of the same loss I see coming. We have a sixteen year old daughter and I still remember when she was a silly girl. But she's growing out of those earlier years and those days are becoming memories. I hope music will one day help me remember those silly days.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

This is so touching William...we never know when we will be called home...so be as silly as you can while we have the chance...
Thanks for sharing your heart with this one...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 19, 2007

But... A Silly Beautiful heartfelt Poem!
That brings out memories to savor!
The flow was unending and sweet!
Warmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2007

Sad, to go so young..
Thanks for sharing William..

Reviewed by Gloria Buono

Reviewed on January 15, 2007

There's a lot of feeling and touching messages for every "silly girl" in this thought provoking prose. Thanks for sharing My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Heartfelt and compelling, William. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2006

Wish I had memories like this..alas my youth was a flat line..mmmm( strict parents)
This touched me deeply..
I saved this one..thankyou William!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

I've been that silly girl. Lovely poem, Bill. Very touching and bittersweet. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 5, 2006

This poem tells me to appreciate the present, we never know how long it is ours..........:(
ty for this reminder
pax A

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 1, 2006

Those are the precious memories that make us who we are!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 1, 2006

...you make me think of all the little things that trigger memories so sweet, just when you thought you had them tucked into the safest place. How nice to remember and bring them out again when there is need.
Taylor~

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 1, 2006

what a lovely memory~

Susan

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 1, 2006

Your memories continue to bloom as a fresh flower. Beautiful verse.
Susan