Succinctly sublime, Pat. Just the words, :My love was taken far too soon," lots of identity there. "Cover thy face...." says so very, very much. ~~ Diana
Absolutely lovely. It is amazing what some people are able to accomplish with only twenty-six letters of the alphabet. My thoughts are with you. Love the command given to the wind in the last line.
A sorrowful write about a love gone. Although the path may seen dark and dreary now, there will be brighter days ahead. Life and time will make that so.
Anna
will always carry your friend in your heart...
Always,
Deborah
It's too quiet around here for me. :)
budd
Peace be with you
William
David
Ron
Cheers for good writing.
Dan
Love ya!
Jane