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Soliliqy Of Retirement
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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 Hear me oh darkness!
Let me wallow in your sow's mire
of doubt and discontent.
Let me languish in this litany of sad lament,
the angst of fearsome freedoms
I have yet to taste,
of perilous pathways to leisure
I have yet to make.

Let me smear this dark decay
over any window shining clear,
seal fast all open portals  
to well-wishes and their cheers.
Let all be dark!
that peering eyes may witness not
this comic visage of my fears.

Ah, but there be the luxury,
if there be only time to loll about in this,
my egregious plight.

But no!
What is this intruder, this theiving nuisance
but the mid-morning sun rousing me
in shameless glory,
throwing at my feet, gems of blinding possibilities...
beckoning a waltz into light.

And so...I will dance.
In these diamond soled slippers
I will dance,
for he cannot be denied.





    

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 Reviews of "Soliliqy Of Retirement"
Reviewed on November 8, 2014
This poem does remind me of depression but also the will to fight one's way up from the pit. The light is victory, perhaps. Sometimes it is not so welcome as it is unfamiliar for a time and thus unwelcome. Then again, maybe I read too much into it, and it is as simple as a reluctance to awaken from deep, dark and compelling dreams to morning's beckoning rays. Either way I will reread it again in a few days and see what it says to me then. Thought provoking and lovely,really. Many blessings to you.
Be well,
Kathy

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on September 11, 2014
Love how this poem starts dark and grows in to the light of joy and dances with abandon.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 3, 2014
an excellent read
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2014
Darkness and then light, "I will dance, for he cannot be denied."
Sounds like depression to me...

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Miss Wisdom (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2014
This brings mixed emotions. 'Mid' morning has never been your everyday style and does not have to be now. Xoxonback

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on August 16, 2014
Indeed it's good to dance
seeing as the music
may drown off memories of the past
and give away to freedom! Well done, Pat!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 15, 2014
From the darkness of sleep's dreams agony to the enlightenment of the morning sun, you have written a poem of charm and worth. The images were delightful.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 15, 2014
vivid imagery dances from the ambiance of this enlightening poem ...

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on August 14, 2014
You have literately pealed back the vestiges of dark and doom in this masterful piece. I feel the warmth of your perceived sunshine. M.True

Reviewed on August 14, 2014
Dance, baby! Dance!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 14, 2014
Darkly compelling; leaves one on the edge of dizzy; very nicely done, Pat. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on August 14, 2014

I have seen genius and this is it. I am stunned Pat.

Reviewed on August 14, 2014
Within the darkness there comes the light. Beautiful and inspiring!!

Sandie


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