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Watching Me
by Derek Castle → (All Poetry by Derek Castle)
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I see you standing there
Watching me
Thinking
He could be me
I could be him
We could be together
But were so far apart
Lines drawn in the sand
That we could never cross

I see you standing there
Watching me
Wondering
Could he be the one
Can he complete me
Make my world
The world I knew it would be
But your world is not mine
And my world is my own

I see you standing there
Watching me
Shouting
Trying to get my attention
With strong words
Persuasive thoughts
A flash of a smile
And a light touch
But I’m gone

I see you standing there
Watching me
Sighing
Knowing that all I say is true
Two people like us
Can never be
Its not going to work
When all you do is stand there
Watching me

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 Reviews of "Watching Me"
Reviewed by Jennave Coz
Reviewed on July 30, 2007
Clever, Complete, I couldn't help myself...For a moment you seem so familiar...Great write.Jen

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 29, 2007
Interesting write, so near and yet so far the two shall never meet.......

Be safe,
Karen


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