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Complete Circle
by April Sims → (All Poetry by April Sims)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
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As the old adage goes "The grass is not always greener on the other side"

Complete Circle


By April Sims © 2006


 


I loved you for you


From the first day


I first laid my eyes upon you


 


Even though


Others were cruel to you


 


Because


 


You walked with your head facing down


Had low self esteem


Overweight


And


Diagnosed with morbid obesity


 


One day I took your chin in my hand


And slowly raised your head


I looked into your eyes


And traveled deep down inside


Pass your massive flesh


Until I arrived at your immense spirit


 


I took you home


And taught you to love yourself again


I encouraged you to eat properly


And exercise regularly


Without ridicule


 


In no time


A brand new you emerged


 


But


 


I think I went a tad bit too far


 


Because


 


Now you are the complete opposite


You now walk with your head held high


And your once low self esteem


Has been replaced with conceit


 


Your now beautiful flesh


Harbors an ugly spirit


 


More and people noticed you


And you no longer noticed me


 


You flew the nest one day


Without warning or notice


To be with someone else


And started a family


 


But


 


You got too comfortable


And started eating again


And stopped exercising


 


She,


The one you chose


Desired your flesh


And could care less about your spirit


 


Now you are back where you started


Begging me to pick up


Your pieces


And begin again


By being your friend


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 Reviews of "Complete Circle"
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on September 9, 2007
Your poem shows a generous spirit to an undeserving person. Despite his or her frivolous manner, you did something good and worthwhile. No one can blame you if you refuse asecond time around.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
Interesting write about shallow people. Holly

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 4, 2007
A true slice of life in this poignant poem.


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