Forgive me, Mother. (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

This HONEST O P E N poem is beautiful! Becca
and your mom and you have a special bond, that is PRICE-LeSs!
Given from God above
a mothers special brand of love
to cherish forever in a day
as we see ourselves in our own children one Future day to come.
I'm glad you know and have shared, your mom would be even prouder, to know this special warm caring wisdom-filled daughter!

WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 4, 2009

a beautiful write Becca
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you both

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on February 4, 2009

mother's, a gift from God -- peace and love -- JMW

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on February 2, 2009

You are truly blessed! Though I can never share in your experience, I find it comforting nowadays, to read of others, it all helps dear lady.
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Mary Duhart

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

A very moving and heart felt piece.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 31, 2009

A bittersweet remembrance which very few children, becoming adults, don't seems to retrace to and bless their mother for be what they were.
A good daughter always will thing of mother.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

This is so lovely--a beautiful tribute

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

Rebecca,

Such a beautiful tribute to your Mom. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

Beautiful write, Rebecca; brava! At least you still have your mom; ours died almost nineteen years ago; we still miss her so much!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

Becca,, This poem to your Mom will make her heart sing,, I am sure she is so very proud of you! Beautiful,,,you should listen to the song Mamma by Ildivo....

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

Becca as a father and grandfather who has raised three daughters I can tell you in a heart beat that your Mom would not only forgive you but would give her all to do it all over again with you.That being said do this up on some fancey paper, wrap it in a gift certificate to do one of the favorite things you both share and a promise to do it the next time you go home...

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

Rebecca,

What a beautiful tribute to your Mom. I'm sure we've all made mistakes we'd love to atone for. You're lucky you had the chance to tell your Mom. So often we take time for granted, and before we can say anything, our Moms or Dads are gone. Wonderful write.

Mary

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

I agree with Carol. Beautiful and loving. A mothers love knows no end. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

Beautiful and loving !
We only have one mom...and her worth is beyond words. But your writing captures some of it!

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

Oh she sure does Rebecca for a mother's love is unending and forgiveness is always there within her heart. So enjoy those beaufiful memories with her. Love and hugs for this beautiful write. Love, Bonnie