crying verses (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

no problems with a visit from the Muse have you my dear friend -- this is very ingenious -- I can certainly relate to the tale which you tell though -- much love and peace -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

OH MY GOD! I love this POEM! Becca
As your muse finds you
hidden with expressive words
it's onward and upwards
as your verses appear honest and clear
feelings of poetry cheer
you make us fully aware.
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 17, 2009

I can relate, Becca. Your sentiments make a great deal of sense. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Exellent write Becca
When your muse has disappeared
Its great when one writes about it
Poetically
Wallah! your muse is back
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Becca this is so sweetly sad that it really moves the poet in all of us. Your grasp of hearts, love and flowing words is non comparable and it is so good to read your work again.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

This has a mystical quality to it, a softness that I enjoyed. Lovely phrasing for something we all face from time-to-time--writers block. Wonderful write! Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Dusty memories...now free, and the somnolent Muse shouldn't hold those verses to herself. Perhaps a cold tear could wake her.

Georg

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

It is no riddle,
That you do piddle.
When writing verse,
You do not diddle......

Wally

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

A well written and honest poem that was expressed beautifully where you capture the essence of the hardships of being a poet.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

I am not a poet, but I have been feeling sad lately; you capture the pain and loneliness well in compelling verse! I hope this isn't directed at me; if it is, I hope you find it in your heart to forgive me!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

and you do the poetry so well..
With love,
Ron

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

beautiful!

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Very sad but true
When you don't know what to do
Keep on writing
It'll get you through
Doug

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Ah the elusive muse and how it escapes us from time to time.