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The Criminal On The Cross
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What went through the mind of the criminal on the cross with Jesus as he asked to be with him in his kingdom?

 

 
I hung beside a special man
who was out of place between us.
I tried to be encouraging
but the other criminal could only cuss.
 
My heart was warmed when I heard him say
Father forgive them everyone.
Although the dark clouds gathered
it seemed like he brought out the sun.
 
All the evil things I had done
suddenly seemed to disappear
and for the first time I felt clean
with God’s love so very near.
 
Boldly I asked if I could be
allowed in his kingdom to stay.
With strong assurance he said to me
I’d be in paradise this day.
 
I knew I was already there
freed from all my terror and fear
and when he took his final breath
his life was gone but he was near.
 
He died much sooner than I did
yet his spirit surrounded me
and as my life faded away
his face was all I could see.

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 Reviews of "The Criminal On The Cross"
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
Larry...we fail to identify with the thief on the cross at peril to our eternal salvation. The finished work is Jesus', not ours, and should be a spur to us to make that work complete in us by going in the world and doing as He did. Words and pious gestures are insufficient. Our actions and changed attitudes are proof of our identification with the thief on the cross in our lifetime.

Good write...God bless,

ChipB.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 7, 2013
With my past, that criminal would be me...I enjoyed reading your version of this, Larry...God Bless you...ed


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