Once again, lovely! You poured your heart out in this one, and I felt every word. I believe you have a gift, when your words touch someone! I've read quite a number of your poems, and enjoyed every one.
Reviewed by Zahra V (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
I enjoyed reading this piece. Love is the greatest gift a person can ever give and to have a second chance at it is even better!!
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"Second Chance" tell us between lines that the main character missed the first time and are grateful if a second chance come his way, then again one doesn't give any woman the key to all your treasures by asking for permission...or the man will find himself taken to the cleaners, emotionally and otherwise.
A good and mature poem that, for writing this review I will get my hide tenderized by the maidens around here.
Again, a hearty welcome!
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Zahra V
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Kathy
Ted
"Second Chance" tell us between lines that the main character missed the first time and are grateful if a second chance come his way, then again one doesn't give any woman the key to all your treasures by asking for permission...or the man will find himself taken to the cleaners, emotionally and otherwise.
A good and mature poem that, for writing this review I will get my hide tenderized by the maidens around here.
Again, a hearty welcome!
Georg
enjoyed reading
peace be with you
William