Grandpa Hawk perched in a tree
looked down at me on a stump
gazing at fields being primed
for the advancement of the times
and asked unassumingly:
What is in your heart?
And so I began to speak;
I dread this alien rat race
mirrored in congested big city phlegm
manifest-destiny all over again
mixing into this country world
like oil with water
strangers with shark-like expressions
convoluting the landscape
in Hummers Volvos SUV’s
along with their collective wannabe’s
I dread this transformation of new homes and buildings
expanding like popcorn no locals can afford
I dread this attack of the new-age Borg;
Resistance Is Futile-You Must Assimilate
I dread these pimps of poorly planned progress
for pathetic self-profit
I dread taking scenic drives in the country
thundering with traffic thick as bees on honey
being forced to find places away from
familiar places where technology
yet has targeted its thoughtless tentacles
and capitalist clowns have yet proclaimed
their arrogant game of eminent domain
places where open spaces still be free of idiot boxes
blasting gangster obscenities
where no yuppies have fenced off areas once always open and free
of eyes of steel and robotic gates and fortresses of concrete
high as prison walls
and grandpa Hawk looked at me with eyes of wisdom and said;
listen,
listen to us
winged ones
four leggeds
insects
trees
rivers
as we sing our death
songs,
then grandpa Hawk flew off into the blue,
and I rose from the stump
for a bulldozer was coming
and I could no longer stay.
Your poem is descriptive to say the least!
A world going awry is truly scary!
This poem brought many tears and sadness to my heart, for what I have been feeling all along!
In a world gone wrong! as I try and stay POSITIVE!
May the red tailed hawks send messages far and near, to the spirits who care everywhere!
Write On!
and WELCOME! to the den, my door is always O P E N!
Warmest Blessings and Peace, Warrior Lady Sheooxoo
STay Positive! STay STrong!
"I dread these pimps of poorly planned
progress for pathetic self-profit "
Clear and uncompromising with meaningful alliterations.
You are looking from a different perspective and described what most people have become unable to see. Which is also the meaning of poetry.
"areas once always open and free
of eyes of steel and robotic gates
and fortresses of concrete
high as prison walls "
Great imagery till the very last words.
Axilea
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Much Blessings and may the great spirit live within your soul and guide you to greatness.
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Be safe,
Karen
Welcome to AD.
Walt