A twig from an ancient tree
was planted in this valley
ninety-years and a day ago
with grandparents' post-migration arrival
propagated with a labor of love
and dream songs which sprouted
roots rich with indigenous sacred
hope and over decades this twig
branched-out into an ancestral tree lush
with a heritage of scattered leaves
some have prevailed on the railroads
farmfields and overseas warriors in battlefields
some have crooned and swooned on saddles of assimilation
not total though to gain an education
some have hummed commitments to heaven
in humble jubilation some have whistled
weary in whirlwinds on life’s meager means
some have not forsaken chanting enchanted
traditional ancient cosmic
conscious themes and now
in this soul-deadening out of balance
Y2K millennium infancy I reflect
in the autumn years of my being
standing somber in the shade of our tree;
what will become of it and me?
For the tree expands into five generations
perpetuating a pristine perpetual dream
in this valley reality like enormous
hawk wings encapsulating us with
a shade of simplicity celebrated in
a social status of invisibility and I
native son shy of eloquence
irrigate the tree with common words
to nourish-in nutrients of this life force
flowing in crimson canals of flesh
in the fertile soil of San Joaquin
in the plants and critters
in the rivers and pulses of little towns
being shredded for progress and malls
in the decades deciphered from a million
memories fertilized for posterity prestige
and dignity of the tree
and landscape and panorama
of our souls.
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God Bless
Glenda
I really love your intense style! and forward mind and heart imagery!
I write of the spirit of Trees/ and Hawks, red tailed is my totem, I see them daily and take pictures!
YOu speak volumes with your poem and your Bio! I was impressed!
I plan to stay! YOu have touched my heart and soul in a strong way! I Started Tracking/Following your heart and soul, I can feel their is much for us to know!
Write On!
Warmest Blessing, Inner Peace, LIGHT and Love! Warm Hugs, Warrior Lady Sheooxo
STay Positive!
Come by if time time allows and see what generates to your soul and heart! All I ask is a start...May WE pray for our Trees and their spiritual pulses! I am a TREE- Hugger! Much needed grounding and loving!
I read a lot, say what I like in poems, but rarely find that a whole work is outstanding.
Your writing proves how free form poetry can find its own rhythm and pulse and flow freely, full of life. You obviously enjoy working with sounds and alliterations.
But what I find here above all, is poetry with no cliché, made of integrity and experience. Words that have the strength of an engagement and that is something I need to see. Don't we all?
Axilea
Be safe,
Karen
Do you mind if I introduce you to my trackers?
Walt