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Tel-Love-Phone
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"Tel-Love-Phone" We're the operators of bliss. Attach by a line that can't be disconnected. Staying together is the tone we set A precious bond without any hangups Busy signlas never interfere in our connection The only number to dial is 1 Cause we're both #1 to one another We can feel our presence without caller I.D. Voices echoes through our hearts The sound is loud and clear with no static involve When things are going down,we pick each other up To hear problems that are affecting us The main intent is to make us feel better A communication that's close instead of long-distance The wires of our relationship will never be cut into pieces Copyright(c) 2009 Edwin Hurdle

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Reviews of "Tel-Love-Phone"

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on December 17, 2009

Very interesting and profound Edwin!
You have a very beautiful gift and
What a timely write! Thanks for sharing
be encouraged Edwin and keep on writing!

Much Love,
Always!!!
Margaret

Reviewed by Jolynne Hudnell

Reviewed on September 13, 2009

This came across as very loving, I especially enjoyed how you took all the phrases involved with telecommunication and made them intimate.

Reviewed by Zahra V (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2009

I enjoyed reading this piece Edwin. You have tapped into something with this one!!

Zahra V

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

I can relate to that Edwin, keep growing my brother and God bless. I am all wired up! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Connection holds the line for love to slip across, and it flows beautifully through each and every word of this poem. :)

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

"the wires of our relationship will never be cut into pieces", what a unique way to relate the devotion of true love Edwin -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

UNIQUE AND WELL DESCRIBES THE 'CONNECTION' BETWEEN TWO IN LOVE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Love calls and eminates from this lovely poem. The connection is really there!......M

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Some hearts are truly connected and there is no need for technology to interfere. Touching! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Brenda Dobson

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

From the first line to the last ... a well-executed piece, written to draw the reader in... gives new insight into the importance of "communication...LISTENING!" Most appreciated :) Brynn

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

Another soft and fuzzy write Edwin. Your poem is warm and peaceful. Thanks for sharing.

Anna

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

Now to hear my review you should press: 1 for direct comment, 2 for a summary, 3 for a two ways discussion, 4 for repeating the first three, piiiiiip!

Georg

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

The communication of love is one that never has a busy signal.

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