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Celebrating my 64th Birthday in the Dead Zone
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Modesto night life


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Celebrating my 64th Birthday in the Dead Zone

Bass beat from The Boardroom
stuns eardrums from a block away.
Flat screen t.v.s illuminate
a fenced courtyard where
four young women stuffed
into tiny black dresses smoke
and gossip at a cement picnic table.
The front door security guy
doesn’t bother checking my ID,
looks at wrinkles, greying hair,
waves me inside where a wall
of jolting music assaults,
insults the senses.
Twentysomething men line
the bar; trolling females
cluster optimistically
around bistro counters.
Inside the glass mezzanine,
red lights pulse.
A DJ spins disc after disc
of seething cacophony,
no discernible lyrics.
11 p.m. and it’s 93 degrees,
Central Valley hell,
night of Yom Kippur,
drinks all around,
not a single patron atoning.
 


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 Reviews of "Celebrating my 64th Birthday in the Dead Zone"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 16, 2013
You certainly described the place well… Even though you seem out of place there.



I long to hear the lyrics again myself. However, once heard I may not understand the subtle meaning that many of the words impart to the young and hip crowd… texting while they listen, multitasking their experience to the hilt.



Ron

Reviewed by Laura Bayless
Reviewed on September 16, 2013
Very descriptive. Our idea of "night life" changes, though I did celebrate my 70th in a shit-kicker bar.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 16, 2013
its the way of some
budd


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