spare strong writing with repetitions
that truly work and aren't there for padding;
i like this work, Mercy;
my friend, Duke, recommended you to me and
i'm glad he did
I was scrolling through the M's and was irresistably drawn to your nom de plume (or guerre, as the case may be). I am very impressed and hope to see you post more and more. I don't sugarcoat anything; if I see something that I don't care for, I just don't comment. So you're from "down in Loos-i-anna, where the alligators grow so mean..." I myself am a High Plains cajun who lives in a Harsh Paradise where the grizzly bears grow so damned big and mean. Welcome to AD!
Beautifully written and so true to form. You have a very good eye to see what many cannot, enjoyed...
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2007
Oh yeah, I can relate and I like your style, plus the fact that you seem to "know" whereas you speak . . . THAT, in my not-so-humble opinion says it all . . . Welcome to AD from a Louisiana man who thinks if anybody can change the corruption down here Bobby can . . .
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
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that truly work and aren't there for padding;
i like this work, Mercy;
my friend, Duke, recommended you to me and
i'm glad he did
john
I was scrolling through the M's and was irresistably drawn to your nom de plume (or guerre, as the case may be). I am very impressed and hope to see you post more and more. I don't sugarcoat anything; if I see something that I don't care for, I just don't comment. So you're from "down in Loos-i-anna, where the alligators grow so mean..." I myself am a High Plains cajun who lives in a Harsh Paradise where the grizzly bears grow so damned big and mean. Welcome to AD!
duke
Be safe,
Karen
Hard to climb the mountain, but the journey worth it, yes. Excellent write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.