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Rain Down on Motivation
by J. W. Murphy → (All Poetry by J. W. Murphy)
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Rough but churning.

_____________________


Swimming on solid ground, or
Walking through deep water
(if) It's all the same
     in a head game--
That's what the mind's for,
Clouding up actions
     'til clouds gather
     in overreaction
     and second-guessing spasms
Rain down on motivation--
Drowning the deepest chasms
     'til heads are swimming
     the world upended
     hair distended
     compass falters,
Until no one knows if they are
Swimming on solid ground, or
Walking through deep water.
 

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 Reviews of "Rain Down on Motivation"
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 4, 2007
enjoyed,

thanks,
dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 4, 2007
Aha...great offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Great writing,Hugs













Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
I truly enjoyed your work! Keep poetry alive!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Well written! Enjoyed the comparative confusion of standing on solid ground or walking through deep water. To be or not to be motivated....

Be safe,
Karen


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