Haikus can be tricky. This one resonates with a gong. Suggestion: drop the word "is" in the first line. Haikus don't need formal grammar and the line works well without it and conforms then to the restrictions of the 5-beat meter.
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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until grief occurs. . .
life or death to be blamed for that,
how to know.
Ron