this is excellent. the fourth verse might read more smoothly with one more word added to the last line ie 'that chokes and silences all her screams'. but what do i know, just a thought.
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You keep it all in perfect rhythm and rhyme
which is always an extra bonus for the reader!
Splendid poetry!
etw