this is excellent. the fourth verse might read more smoothly with one more word added to the last line ie 'that chokes and silences all her screams'. but what do i know, just a thought.
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
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Reindeer
Extremely well written!
Well Penned
William ......Peace
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Jennifer
(((HUGS))) to you and the kiddos~ love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
You keep it all in perfect rhythm and rhyme
which is always an extra bonus for the reader!
Splendid poetry!
etw