Laziness is my lover He wants me to lay up under him all day long Sweaty, funky, au naturale You don't need to go nowhere, baby he whispers to me as he holds me tighter and locks me in his embrace. (c) Berry 2004
Hot, sensual write, Blackberry! Ooh yes, Mr. Laziness can be quite a seductor and charmer! One hell of a lover, he is! Great write as always Blackberry!
I can relate to this one...specially on those early mornings I have to get up and go to work--brilliantly penned metaphor! I've been dating him, too LOL
I appreciate everyone's comments. I think the photo may have caused some readers to read this piece as literal. It is an allegorical poem about laziness and how it can seduce you into staying in bed all day in the same way that a lover can seduce you into staying in bed all day. :-) I've been dating laziness for a while now and our relationship is getting really serious. *LOL*
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2004
Wow, sexy poem, wish I wa sin bed with my lover now. You really got across the feel of relaxing in bed in love all day, excellent.
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God bless,
Sandie.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
nice writ,
thanks,
d.
Very nicely done
john+