Why is it that when I stroke your body you don't respond? Why is it that when I kiss you when I come home you turn away? Why do I have to ask to kiss you on your mouth?
Why do I feel like I am serving you instead of loving you? Why don't I feel loved? Why won't you talk to me?
Very deep write, Blackberry! Short but power packed! Many will relate to this. These are questions many are afraid to voice out - instead they just choke up silently. I have posted two writes almost on the same page - I Keep On Loving and The Moment - but on different levels. Painful profound questions. Great one!
These are questions that I'm sure a lot of lovers have wanted to ask the ones they loved and feared the answers they may get so have remained silent instead. If the questions though are being asked silently perhaps it is better to ask and learn the truth then waste your love not knowing.
Felix
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Wow, powerful, this brings back lots of memories of being with the wrong man, this is so true it's painful, especially the 4th line, maybe because I have recalled thinking that one too many times myself. Short, tight and thought-provoking.
Again, this piece reflects what I was going through in a recent relationship and I needed an outlet in order to receive clarity. I write in order to work out my feelings. This is the result of what I was feeling at the time.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
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God bless,
Sandie.
Felix
Regis