No great title for this work - I wrote it to make the reader cry and to feel a deep emotion.
They slept together in the dew-laden grass Embraced in each other’s silent arms. Dreams slipping through their catcher And delivering Purgatory’s sweet charms.
The air was turning cool, they did not complain Only, their embrace became that much stronger. Whispering words heard by no souls on Earth Begging to God that they live just moments longer.
An infant nearby with eyes closed with sleep Smiles faintly near the couple’s dark bed The night sky spinning lullaby enhanced stars And spilling sweet visions in the baby’s head.
Sighs of woe started to echo through nature The embrace wavered and soon tore apart. Pain and anger soon engulfed each partner And bitterness enraged one another’s heart.
Separated by God, the sharp wind began to blow And put distance between the loving eyes. The infant’s unaware of the future’s progression And oblivious to the two soul’s fervent tries.
Two lovers walked near a worn, faded path When two roses blew along their swift trail Their stems were bent as though in embrace Though entwined, their strength had failed.
The woman was intrigued to return the two roses To the place where they tried so hard to remain. Then, she saw the small face sleeping peacefully On a stone carved next to a few day old name.
The baby was sleeping and still unaware Of the world changing as dreams linger on. The roses became brighter and seemed to lean To reach out and embrace the marble stone.
A child now lost to the despairs of the world No hopes and achievements shall ever be made. Broken-hearted parents had left him the roses To watch over him in God’s eternal shade.
If flowers could speak with more words than love Then these roses would have novels to sing. For they embraced when placed back on the grave And welcomed the light of the angels’ wings.
This does convey the very meaning of the Title and sadness pours through in each word as it captures the readers heart.
Felix
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Beautiful, Lori.
I've missed reading your work.
Elizabeth
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
This ending is fantastic, really classic. This reminds me a bit of Martina Mcbride's "Broken Wing," which is one of my favorite songs ever. Great write.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
Felix
I've missed reading your work.
Elizabeth