Outstanding! You've told this story well, bringing some enlightenment to readers of how hopelessness takes over a life. Since I began volunteering one day a week at a Pregnancy Care Center, I have met more downtrodden women, who come to the Center for help in providing for their families. It's a real blessing to be able to reach out and extend love and care for them.
You might like a poem I wrote recently called "A Glimpse of Hunger," although it's a sad one, too.
Connie
This post is so sad and what thoughts are conjured up. Having to grow up at a very young age, knowing sorrow, loneliness, thinking no one cared, wrong decisions as she matured, finally coming full circle once again to sadness,etc..
"poverty's disgrace" is certainly the right term! This poem reminds me of those Appalachian photos during the Depression years taken by, I think, Margaret Bourke-White. She's the same one who photographed Gandhi I feel quite sure. Well expressed. :)
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You might like a poem I wrote recently called "A Glimpse of Hunger," although it's a sad one, too.
Connie
This post is so sad and what thoughts are conjured up. Having to grow up at a very young age, knowing sorrow, loneliness, thinking no one cared, wrong decisions as she matured, finally coming full circle once again to sadness,etc..
Regis
So sad and heartrending but so vividly written!
Cynthia
A life, painfully penned - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Sandie Angel :o)