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In All Probability--
by Lloyd Lofthouse → (All Poetry by Lloyd Lofthouse)
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Didn't Sinatra sing, I did it my way?

“Son, you can be anything you want,” dad said.

I never heard this.
After all, a virus told my parents
I wasn’t going to live long enough
to be anything but a child.

Later, John Wayne, on the big screen, said,
I could be a hero.
That didn’t happen.
Instead, I came back from Vietnam with PTSD.

When I was a teacher man
for thirty years, students said,
“This is boring.
Why should I read?
Why should I do homework?
I’m going to be a famous baseball player;
a super model;
an astronaut;
win American Idol and cut a record;
be president of the United States.
Why go to school?
After all, look at Bill Gates.”

My son’s mother told him
he would be a famous movie star
and buy her a mansion; a Mercedes Benz.
He was bored in high school
where he stuck pencils in his nose to get attention.
Later, he dropped out of college.
After all, his mother told him
he could be anything.
Today, at thirty-three, he waits tables
Chasing clouds that vanish.

Do you think Bernard Madoff’s mother
said her son could steal fifty billion
If that’s what he wanted?
If so, look where that got him.
At least the odds are printed on a lottery ticket.
A few win.
Most don’t.


 
 
 

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Reviewed by just areader (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
I occasionally google you to see what you're up to.
I even bought your book.
I worshiped you for 18 years.
But now every time I read how disappointing I am to you - it hurts.
I may have made mistakes, but even my mother (the witch) still loves me.
Isn't that what parents are suppose to do?
Love their children?
regardless?

Sincerely,
The Boy Half Your Age

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on April 1, 2009
An excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
Great writing..well done indeed...Hugss

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Lloyd,
That virus couldn't have been more wrong! Great exploration (in a quiet calm voice and tone) of 'the dream' and the constant reality, the cold truth that no one in the end owes us a living, a career or an identity. It's good to see you back posting poetry, I missed you.
John

Reviewed on March 29, 2009
You tell quite the tale, Lloyd, one thing for sure, your life hasn't been dull. You're right - have better odds getting struck by lightning than getting rich - since I've been indirectly hit, does that mean I'll win the lottery?!? Sigh ... got to have money to play. Well penned, Lloyd.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Yes, it's a crap shoot "they" say. My aim in life was never to be one of "Them." I'm glad you survived and tell it as it is. Use to tell my kids they could be anything they wanted to be if they worked hard enough at it. They are in their 30's now and probably have about 40 years left in which to accomplish the task. I never said how long it would take. oops! I enjoyed this poem; said a lot in a few pristine lines. Cheers, J'nia

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Yes, fantasy land as we know it. The last line says it all.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Ah the lottery of life is ongoing, if we live we win, if we get lead poisoning from having pencils up our nose, well we then...ed

Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Interesting write of how life never quite turns out the way you think. Also, the importance of education. No, most don't win lottery tickets fortunately.

Mary

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Yes, of course, to the Sinatra question. He said he hated
My Way, but it made him a ton of money. Trying to grow up to
be somebody ain't easy, unless you're somebody to start with.
Happily for you, and us, that virus was wrong. -gene.


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