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I CAN'T HEAR YOU! by: Linda Law
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This could be an Action/Thriller, but I decided to put to poetry...ha! So...humor me!

I CAN'T HEAR YOU!

by:  Linda Law

Remember when we were slender and lithe,
in love with love and searching for Mr. Right?

Pure as the driven snow, flirtatious and soft,
Yet deep inside knew I'd be classy not trashy

It took me forever to find the right man
and shocked when he said I was pretty and sexy!

The years have passed by, and thank God for the memories, especially thanks that I even recall them

Today as my guy and I got all mushy, he said,
How long must I keep my eyes shut; I can feel you
like braille; know all your bumps head to the tail...

We laughed and talked about how we used to be
young and exciting, ready for an adventure
Now we can think about it, and it tires us indeed,
Okay with you if we do this later?  Sure...how late?

Dressed up all spiffy and cute we both looked
Went to have lunch, sat in a booth, ordered BBQ
French fries and Rootbeer, more catsup will do

We lingered and held hands, and finally got up
He nudged me to the door, as I pulled him behind
We both knew we had much more in mind

He through the backdoor, me through the front..
by the time I came in, he was stretched out prone
on the Sofa in front of the big TV...forgot about me!

Dragged in the computer, to sit next to my guy
figured I'd work and share this special time with him
I squeezed my bottom onto the sofa...
He looked at me, surprised and smiling

Aha...he's thinking "later is here", but no..Not so!
I worked for awhile, and noticed his eyes
shut and snoring, so I touched his face and said
to him..."I want a hug, and maybe a snuggle"

His body laboured toward me from his side of the sofa, and mine got stuck to the leather on the right
We scooted and soon in the middle we met
Both exhausted; all the energy was spent

Finally, I laid my head on his shoulder
He lifted his arm to caress and hug me..."Oh,Awh,
Golly this hurts"....as I moaned and groaned in
symphony with him; or is the word sympathy?

We broke apart, slowly and carefully
Afraid something would crack, creak or break
He looked at me and said, "where'd we go wrong?"
I don't know...so let's just hold hands and remember

Oh sweet memories... Marathons, energy well spent
hotels, motels, the boat and the pool...and school!
We talked about it, laughed and he-hawed!
Where did the years go?  Where did our bodies go?

"If only our bodies would move like our minds" he said this more times than I want to hear
The day is almost gone, and he's resting in there,
While I write about what was and isn't and can't

The one thing we agreed on is that we are happy
but slow...creaking and creeping, slow as we go

Laughing and hugging and talking about it...
Wondering what will be next to go?

What?  What did you say?  When?  When did we?
Who?  Who are you?  Let me touch you, Oh yeh..
it's you!  Who?  I CAN'T HEAR YOU? 


 

 

 


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 Reviews of "I CAN'T HEAR YOU! by: Linda Law"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Clever and insightful, Linda. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 26, 2009
I can really relate to what you wrote!!!!! I enjoyed the wee bit of humor also....M

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
I love your reviews and value the time you took to write them... thank you.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
You are very special!

Your poems are alive with music!

I can Hear YOU!

LOL,

John Michael

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Beautifully written
Enjoye much
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on February 15, 2009
This has a bit of it all! I love its nostalgic feel, its gentle humor, but mostly I love the understanding between the two after all those years together. A very enjoyable read Linda! Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
Linda, I love it, it is so perfect for pretty well all of us. Thank you for the memories and smiles lol.

newfie Hugs my friend, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
Linda, this is wonderful...so true, honest and beautiful....and humorous...but touches the heart. I love it.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 12, 2009
This is splendid! A view and insight into your lives as well. Surely it's one of your best. Thanks for sharing it. Cheers

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 12, 2009
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!! Brilliant, you kept my eyes glued to the computer screen, this is so tender and loving, a little melancholic, but still precious.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 12, 2009
I can relate to this, Linda, lol
you've captured it with the question
of body or mind... too bad we're not
wise and young, only as young as you feel
I guess. Hopefully!

Reviewed on February 12, 2009
gather the caravan of memories, hoist up the sails for in the deepest of silence
"I CAN'T HEAR YOU! by: Linda Law" reaches out to grab us with some humor of life's woes & the importance of carefree blessings of learning acceptance through the gracile beutitude's of real love!
Much Love & Inspirations to You Poetess & Den Sister
Vickie

Reviewed by Jack Kuperman
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
What is really important, the body or the mind?

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Linda:

This one is sweet, funny, and captivating. Loved this indeed!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Lovely memories in humorous lines - well done, Linda!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Donnie Madden (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Linda,

You reached inside of my mind,
brought back memoirs of olden times.
Its sad that we can not hold those,
feeling all our life through.
But our body will not hold true,
to the young feeling we once had.
Thank you for reminding me of those,
by gone day of younger lust, how sad.

Huggs to you my Lady.....Donnie



Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Linda; Excellent write, thank you so much for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Just the comforts of knowing...there is someone who cares..to share with and laugh.
You are blessed....and in no way a tired ole woman! Just reading of your daily adventures wears me out! Loved this write!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
My goodness, taking us all on a journey through time and yet no matter what happens the shared love can only grow stronger filled with many memories, masterful piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Great write, Linda; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Sad but true for a lot of us...lol

Fee

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
What a write...this is when memories come in handy, our minds are strong but our bodies are weak...take on a whole new meaning...I absolutely loved this write my friend...giggles and joy..love and hugs, Bonnnie

Reviewed by Stuart McCallum
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
Linda,

An absolute gem of a poem, however, one small thing doesn't ring true -- you are still young and exciting, plenty of good times ahead inside you!!!

Great little diddy, Stuart


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