Enjoy the times today will bring
remember them somehow
but all that really counts in life
is what you're living now
You captured my attention from the beginning with your consistent rhyme, but your ending lost me. Thanks for sharing and please accept the constructive criticism with wisdom.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
A nice poem indeed.
Greetings.
GorejaMuseum.com
Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Oh I like this! one for the first wall you see in the morning :))wonderful Sheri
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Kathy
remember them somehow
but all that really counts in life
is what you're living now
You captured my attention from the beginning with your consistent rhyme, but your ending lost me. Thanks for sharing and please accept the constructive criticism with wisdom.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Greetings.
GorejaMuseum.com