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What's That Smell?
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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What’s That Smell?


 


I said, “What is that smell?”
While I walked, holding the hand of Aunt Flo,
She said, “That’s the smell of rain.
That’s what makes things grow.”


 


It soaks right down into the ground,
Snuggles up close to the roots of the tallest trees-
Makes flowers bloom, and grass turn green-
It makes birds joyously sing, and gives the buzzzz to the bees


 


Then Aunt Flo begin to show me things,
Grand things I’d never seen-
Tiny frogs, and turtles just as small-
just hatched chicks, with naked little wings


 


Up the road a bit we heard a squawk and a squeak,
so we hurried to capture a look-see-
There on the pond of a farmer’s land-
was a Mama Swan and seven swimming babies


 


Not too far away stood a horse and her brand new colt,
with big marbled eyes, and long squiggly legs-
It was a busy busy morning, grunting pigs, cackling hens,
Aunt Flo said it was because they had been laying eggs


 


So Aunt Flo bought some, eggs that is,
fresh from the hen house, off the farmer’s land-
When we got home, she cooked’em right up,
I said, “What’s that smell?” She said,
“It’s Spring, ain’t it grand?”


 


© Lisa Hilbers
April 10, 2007


 


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Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Loved this pen Lisa. Great visuals

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Great write

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
this made me smile...reminded me of my youth on my uncles dairy farm...excellent work here.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
The most wonderful smell to me....specially in freshly ploughed soil!!just love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Such vivid detail. In the eyes of a child, a mysterious wonder of all that surrounds them. Just lovely. Thank you!

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
What a beautiful walk through the country you have given us, Lisa. I miss the rural life when I read words like these, but I certainly don't miss the never ending, back-breaking work that goes along with it. For all of its beauty and simplicity, growing up on a farm was difficult, but as everything around us grew, so did our character, our sense of responsibility, our appreciation for teamwork, our sense of family and our self esteem. I suspect that if I had ever had children, I would have wanted them to grow up on a farm, too. Thanks for tickling the memories from their cobweb shrouded places in the back 40 of my mind, Lisa. You warmed my heart and brought a soft smile to my face.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Lisa,

One can definitely smell it in the air.

Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Lisa,

Yes, it is. Well done! You've captured all of the wonderful things of the season and put it in fragrant, beautiful poetry; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
What a sun filled write to open the season with. Beautifully done Lisa.

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Enjoyed this much...shoveled much of this in my time...of course I grew up on a farm and live on one today...I like Ed enjoy the smell of nature and farmlife...great write, always a pleasure to read your work!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Me Too (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Beautifully done and yes, I can smell the barnyard, I mean spring.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
“It’s Spring, ain’t it grand?”

It surely is, as is this poem! And when I saw the pic, I thought 'that smell' might be good old horse manure. I even like the smell of that - especially in the Spring.

Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Delightful write, Lisa, thanks for bringing a smile to my face this morning! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2007
Dear Lisa:

This is a joy to read. Love the spirit of spring told through an sweet conversation. Your words paint a fresh, vivid picture.

Kathy


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