The first and last lines of your poem "Paradise," "Ukulele's song" and "Treasured paradise" speaks peacefully to my soul as I look out the window and see snow falling that has covered the ground and the trees. Guess what? I am playing my ukulele, fingering this four-string instrument. Like you, there at the seaside, I am having a peak experience. Indeed, "Wonderment takes flight" and paradise is real, at least for a moment, Thank you Carolyn
Wouldn't I love to be there right about now!!! It minus a gazillion here and lots of snow everywhere! Your words were enchanting...carried me away.....
... wherever this is, Carolyn, you have conveyed it beautifully with just the right telling detail. You have articulated the paradise of creative wonderment brilliantly here. xx
YOU TOOK ME THERE. SOUNDS LIKE THE MEMORIES OF A BEAUTIFUL PLACE...SO WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH ...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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Hugs,
Anna
I like the way at the very end you told us were it was written.
I assume going home.
Ron