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Overmined
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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Actually, Spring is tomorrow. But who's counting? Colorado: my precious prison. Snow is positive ions; opposite effect from rain. Trouble with formatting today.

Pling of Spring snow's first flake,
and I'm off.  Off sleep.
Call me Canary.
White is the coal that labors my lungs --
I know before the window shows.

Many useless talents make this house
of bone their bog: 
perfect pitch; hearing and smell
as though bear or dog;
prescience, in dream, in wakefulness.

The snow, so lovely,
makes the old new, embracing
chain link, multi-tiered planters
with restless empty rows, last year's
stoic garden stalks, the walks.

At times, I photograph the new universe,
trying to love (the) (coal) mine enemy.
The day bathes in abominable beauty.
Snow shimmies, nigh sings, while
exhaustion expires me, a wastrel in wind.

Isn't it amazing, someone who does not see me
says.  Oh yes, I gasp, shoulders like large
commas paused in pain -- resplendent, I say,
me the miner, the under, overly-mined, 
picturing green, red, purple pulchritudes past.

Julie K. Shavin 3 19 10

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Overmined"
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2010
So very excellent!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
Splendid pictorial pastures in white. Well done. J'nia

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 20, 2010
The day bathes in abominable beauty.

I know days like this. There is much meaning to this metaphorical and symbolic write that is deserving of more than a single reading; and still I probably won't understand exactly what you mean. But poetry that elicits thought is always worthwhile to me. Thanks for sharing, Juli. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
In the words of Loretta in the song Coal miners Daughter..."we were poor but we had love."
fee

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2010
Maybe canary in the coal mine? Able to sense the bitterness and snow outside before snatching a proper view out the window. The miner imagining the multitude of colors promised by Spring; but still stuck in the dreary confines of the earthly trap below, outside, inside, in the mind, etc. It is Friday, however. The end is near. Soon it'll be time to punch the clock and saunter to the nearest watering hole to spend your last paycheck. Lovely poem.


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