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How Love Consumes a Forest
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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I did the painting years ago, but never got around to writing about the Hayman Fire. I need to find my pictures of the aftermath. This is based on a prompt from a poetry workshop.

    How Love Consumes a Forest

And the ghosts of giggling trees strangely still
corporeal their mossgrown huge if humble selves
shelved, their velvet birth and beauty marks
fading the color of a tired prepartum sky -
fractured and whole they lie, tongued and truncated
by the formlessness of flame

their crisscrossings gruesome tictactoes
on barren hills and plains where
a sad woman sat before a camp torching
a love-be-lost letter -- thousands of acres
felled by the folly of one singe'd heart.

What is a forest no longer gleeful, no longer
slaking itself on clouds' copious downpourings
or bathing in the sweet opaque milk of sleet or snow?
The fallen mouths of trees, their knotholes and shelters
that rose each year higher in the seesaw of daybreak –

the broken do not play, do not sway like children in the sun,
do not maintain or shake out their curls, but rather,
embarrassed, rear their useless roots, the great
on down to angelhair, spill their secrets in too much white
shadowing them - sentries that cackled and caved

they lie awake in moonlight dreamless,
paraplegics unable to reach sustenance
nor will they ever touch the thing that allows
one scorched soul to conduct a glorious green singing
into the requiem of charred submission.


- Julianza Shavin


 

 


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 Reviews of "How Love Consumes a Forest"
Reviewed on May 7, 2010
Julie, this be poetry, the finest, bless you! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on May 7, 2010
Powerful piece here. I always appreciate the way you express yourself in verse and in your paintings. In admiration, J'nia

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 7, 2010
Absolutely one of your best Julie, I love it though it also makes me kind of sad...so many forest fires are caused by just stupid and careless people each year and to destroy that much beauty...sad
fee

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 6, 2010
excellent metaphoric observations of broken will infused with readiness to yield its position, if it permits itself to do so...

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2010
Wonderful poetry Julie. Good to read you again.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 6, 2010
Truly fine poetry, Juli; well, at least in my humble opinion. It reminds me of a poem that I have posted here at AD entitled, "Afterburn" although your poem has far more poetic "substance." Love and best wishes,

Regis


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