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Ambien - Take II
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Long time ago: This actually combines a visit to a psychiatrist for sleep meds, and a speculation by an alternative health practitioner working backwards from the characteristics of bp 2: creativity, intellect, insomnia - all in the off-chart range, or so it is purported. Ambien causes memory loss, weight loss, and severe paranoia, the latter of which is addressed here. A bizarre experience - lots of lbs. later, and frightened, I ditched it - after hiding behind a couch, too afraid to go into my followup appointment, but which I finally managed, just in order to say "uh, no thank you."

I hide behind my hair

like a paranoiac behind a chair

like a pedophile behind a grin

like a politician behind a spin

like priest behind a sin,

like a drunk with stashed gin

like a chin beneath a chin

like Re -  Li  - Gion

like a twin behind a twin

lousy lyrics 'neath a din

like a fat inside a thin

like a yang really yin

a snake unshed of skin

a blowless violin

I'm no Elvis, just his hips

nor a Jagger, just the lips

bipolar 1 neatly nipped

a brand new yacht.

what a gyp.

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Ambien - Take II"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
Julie, there are many complex issues at play here. Throughout it all I am quite pleased to know that your will was victorious. For in the final analysis that is the only weapon, the only ally to be relied upon. Battles such as this often consume and never release. May your life be filled with joy, love and peace my friend.Jon Michael

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
You're really dishing out some new and peculiar styles now. Very intriguing. I don't trust the medical establishment at all anymore. Everything is poison. Vaccines, GMO foods, medications. All designed to make you more sick, more docile, destroy IQ, etc. They want compliant automatons. They don't want a healthy, vibrant citizenry. It's not in "their" interests, you see? I like this too, by the way. Dare to be different.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 3, 2010
A powerfully meaningful write; honest and raw. I think the similes are very effective. I do not claim to understand it all. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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