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The long sodden dawns of August
(gray blood of the heart's yawn)
break to bland afternoons.
Deeper in August before it tumbles
to all those coming -embers,
will come the near-meeting
of the moon and Mars,
the world taken with proximity of
two dark rocks beamed on brightly
like a mother upon good sons.
It must be age, that such an event
which, as written, "none who lives
will ever witness again,"
evokes nothing.
Afternoon unto evening evinces a
long Then, the then of your life,
stretching back like a black wake
in starlight, a wake somehow
unconscious or fulsomely slept,
so furled were you
in the lashings of living.
He wrote, whose words you worship
as at a shrine, “how much more
romantic are we, like this, apart,
untangled in the ways of earth,
how perfect we declined that
cratered path, the dull smack
of startling love" – and you know
that he is wise and right.
You think of yourselves in
separate darks,
two crania halo-ed in artificial light,
remitting words through ether,
eyes of soft shadow, each unmoved
by the likes of heavenly bodies
all but kissing, having nothing
on two earth forms that never will,
never must, never wish to,
so intimate are rhey in their
own dying masses
that any body would be jealous
of such – of such's brilliance,
diffidence, dreadlessness,
its pristine earth upon heaven,
its communion like bursting
cormorants in the absolute
perfection that absolute distance
bestows –
from the sodden dawns of August
to the diadems dotting
supernal dusks.
Reviews of "Declining the Cratered Path"
New Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin
Be always safe,
Karen
the following:
Afternoon unto evening evinces a
long Then, the then of your life,
stretching back like a black wake
in starlight, a wake somehow
unconscious or fulsomely slept,
so furled were you
in the lashings of living.
-gene.
How fabulous is that last stanza!
Best Wishes,
Christine
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