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His Age My Age
by Joyelle Evans → (All Poetry by Joyelle Evans)
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Does age really matter when the heart is involved? Some say yes, a few say no.

 

 His Age My Age

 

 

Is a significant difference in age a factor to be explained when love takes the stage or should the negative connotation be announced estrange

My voiced opinion says f*** the ten years of wisdom he has on me

I just request that he passes the knowledge on to me

But a fraction of this world doesn't admire it like me

His name is immediately slained because a young thang caught his hearts attention

But she’s not the typical 20 and he's not the average 30 and somehow one day they found a common ground to be proud of

That began with a friendship of purity and honesty with respect for each others minds and beliefs thrown in the mix

Sex never being a raised issue that line forbidden to be crossed because who wants positions and orgasms to define their existence

So they gambled on restraint and gut feelings to carry them through minor disputes that no longer deserve recognition

To keep their motivation traveling through and beyond the undeniable sexual tension and overpowering life discussions

Because they had confidence in their destiny...should age be allowed to determine their destiny?

The closed mind limited bunch would say "yup", enabled to understand

This is just not about a young woman and a grown man

Who met on the club scene or mall, na Grandma introduced the two odds

Unknowingly preparing a blessing to transpire

With the works of power from a different height, patience and time putting in its 8-5

Something beautiful was birthed

So in this rare case can age really be raised in question?

No ones being taken advantage or mishandled, consistency maintains persistent

I've never been in love with a gentleman before

And even though I own my doubts of what really being in love is

The nature of it all encourages my interest to explore what's beyond these walls

Should age be allowed to determine our destiny?

Hell no

But it can be openly discussed between the two if concerns present theirselves obvious

We've both been slow walking our own paths, accomplished a few goals, entered and exited college, had a child made a child, struggled with speech from then to now, been played been delayed, loved once or twice but somehow some day our paths intersected and combined into one as if it were planned to perfection

So when one whispers in my ear "he's just too old for you girl"

I'll respond matter of factly

Age is only significant in the mind of the beholder but when the heart is a factor age is just a number


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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 20, 2008
Love has no age limits.Age is just a number.I remember when Will Smith on the Fresh Prince of Bel Air was trying to go out with this woman.played by Jasmine Guy from a Different World).Carlton told Will that a college girl will not date someone like him.Will said that he and her are from the same hood.Then he said something that was funny.but yet true.He said "21,28,33,they are all in the same grade".
take care of yourself

Edwin

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on December 13, 2008
I had to comment on this because I can completely relate, and I am in total agreement, age is just a number, and when you love, there is no age, I agree. Will add this to my library :) Michelle

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 3, 2008
Many lasting love relations have been born when age was just a number. With the advent of Viagra, 80 year old men are still enjoying the fruits of a relationship that didn't pay attention to age.


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